Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by Maria Smith on Sun Jul 8 20:32:05 EDT 2001. Comments: To those it may concern: By reading this cyber novel I have made a few conclusions. For on the place and sense that the author is trying to take you was very well thought out in his own mind and to others such as I it is almost a mystery. He used very little detail about what the world or setting really was. It was creative in style of trying to make the imagination run wild, but to those with the more realistic sense it was confusing and pointless, as if the story was only a jumble of high vocabulary words, mixed thoughts and senses. I think with this novel it was beautifully written a mystic and fanciful fashion. The main thing I think others should remember when reading it is the names, places and the written word all show a place of fantasy, but to me it was only a very, almost real perception of our world through a very different looking glass. Author's Note: Chapters 1 through 20 were online at the time this comment was received.   Do you have a comment or opinion about "Water Music" that you would like to share? CLICK HERE to submit your comments for posting above. Thanks! © 2001 ridertown.com All Rights Reserved